English 102 | Fall 2017 | LaGuardia Community College
I love this! And I love that you’re going the name route, as we discussed in class — well done!
On the subject of names, it’s typically considered proper form to refer to an author or scholar by her last name in a paper, so Iizuka instead of Naomi. Additionally, her last name starts with an I, not an L — I know they look the same in some fonts, so it’s an easy mistake to make!
As you continue researching and writing, I’d encourage you to think about the relationship between names and identity: who has the power to name someone, and who has the power to name themselves, in this society and the society that Anon and Nemasani are trying to survive in?
Looking forward to seeing what you come up with!
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