Kavita, I’m glad you decided to focus your paper more specifically on Guyanese migration to the U.S.–it’s a really interesting topic! Here is some feedback on your storyboard:
– While reading your board, I could see that you have a question. I encourage you to make this question more specific and relevant to your paper title (Guyanese Migration to the United States). I was also unable to identify a clear thesis statement in your storyboard.
– How are you planning to make connections between the different elements of your storyboard? Right now this is unclear.
– I can see that you’re planning to do interviews, which is great! Let’s talk about the questions you plan to ask during these interviews.
– What scholarly sources are you planning to use to support your paper?
Kavita, I’m glad you decided to focus your paper more specifically on Guyanese migration to the U.S.–it’s a really interesting topic! Here is some feedback on your storyboard:
– While reading your board, I could see that you have a question. I encourage you to make this question more specific and relevant to your paper title (Guyanese Migration to the United States). I was also unable to identify a clear thesis statement in your storyboard.
– How are you planning to make connections between the different elements of your storyboard? Right now this is unclear.
– I can see that you’re planning to do interviews, which is great! Let’s talk about the questions you plan to ask during these interviews.
– What scholarly sources are you planning to use to support your paper?