Rough Draft Assignment 2

 

Racism is not about bad manners, but a system of treatment, discrimination and brutality in American society. Diversity groups face Racism everywhere their surroundings. In New York City there has been a lot of cases where unarmed individuals are being killed and stopped. After reading the “Intersections” play written by students of LaGuardia community college, gives students knowledge about others situation in terms of financially stability, family matters, education importance, stress they go through and how they resolve it.  In the play of “Intersections” there was a situation occurred at the end, where an unarmed black teenager was shot and killed by the police without any warrant and justify evidence. In America we are been educated that we have our rights everywhere, we have the right to not cooperate with police without any warrant. Yet, there are still individuals mostly Black are more likely to be stopped, searched, arrested, convicted and executed than any other group. How police force overwhelmingly attacks unarmed black individual increasingly in the New York City?

Reading the article “Police Terror in Big Apple” by George Scott, concluded that police brutality has been increased in the New York City. “Stop and Frisk” is all about people experienced with cops. “Stop and Frisk” is when police temporarily detain a person and check that person. As George Scott said “Getting stopped and possibly beaten by NYPD is the experience… for blacks’ folks, yet … VERY few white folks share” (Scott 21). White people are on the sideline in these type of accidents while black people experience “stop and frisk” very often by the police. White don’t face these struggles. Scott also discus that 53% black people were stopped by the NYPD in 2011 compare to white people were stopped only 9%. We see the number difference is way too much between black and white folks stopped by.  To me which obviously seems racism in police system. The stop and frisk law was changed after “Scheindlin ruled in an American civil liberties Uman-initiated case, that the NYPD must have probable cause in order to stop people” (Scott 21). This was a new rule added to the NYC state law by federal Judge Scheindln because of the fact that New York City police officers have blind eye to the evidence and are conducting stops in a “racially discriminatory manner” (Scott 21). Racism should not be existed in this modern world, in the United State of America. America the land of freedom, but not free of discrimination n and racism. A land where innocent teenagers are being killed unarmed. And all this happened in the case of Ramarley Graham in 2012. Graham was 18, an unarmed teenager who was shot and killed by the NYPD in his grandmother house in the Bronx. Graham was shot with “no warrant” (Scott 22). He was killed because he had marihuana and the police saw him with it. However, Graham was not give justice. “In 2013 a grand jury refused to indict the officer” (Scott 22). This case is full of brutally behavior and so prejudice to Graham family. Police did not have any evidence to prove he was the suspect, without any witness he was overwhelmingly shot. This seemed to me every racist. Graham was just a teenager in age where everyone black/white/any race teenager would have these types of drug. Why would a police kill a teenager having marijuana with him? This was inhumane aspect of the NYPD system.

Another article “The Rise Black-aimed death squads among the police” by Amiri Baraka. Amiri Baraka discussed the case of Amadou Diallo’s, 23 years old immigrant from Guinea, was shot and killed by four NYPD in 1999. This case was such a heartbreaking and brutal. Diallo was immigrant, came for education, expect for better life and was killed violently. Baraka said, “These cops were shooting at Diallo’s Blackness” (Baraka 12).  Police officer did not go to investigate why should we kill this black man, what is wrong with him. But they liked to use their guns rather their sense of humor and understanding the reason why killing an innocence person. The 4 officers who killed Diallo motto was “we own the night” (Baraka 12). This shows that the officers were openly terrorizing racial-fascist. This motto fact was resisted by the people and the officers were freed without any guilt. It seems fully racist to me that they were killing him because of his color.

In the “intersection” Janelle, black teenager who won’t give up on her grandmother health as she was on the last stage of cancer. Janelle wanted to bring her grandmother home and won’t let her stay in the hospital or nurse care. She was a hard working at her study but she falls out and got stress about her grandmother’s health. Janelle couldn’t tolerate her grandma’s health and said, “this shit I can buy on the street is better than those fucking pills. A t least with this, she will be at ease” (Intersection 23). When Janelle went to buy drugs and was on her way back home she was stopped by the police named Alex and Ricky. Alex police officer who was chasing a white suspect wearing a hoodie unfortunately Janelle got suspected.

Alex: HANDS WHERE I CAN SEE THEM

Janelle: What I haven’t done anything

Alex: I NEED TO SEE YOUR ID

(she goes for her pockets)

DO NOT REACH YOUR PCKETS

Janelle: But you just said you want to see my ID

Alex: … TURN AROUND. TURN AROUND.

(we hear a gunshot) Phones have begun to appear, flashes of light pointing at the floor.

Ricky: REASONABLE AND EFFECTIVE, THE AMOUNT OF FORNCE WAS REASONABLE AND EFFECTIVE….

The above scene shows that Janelle was on her way home and she was stopped by the police with the doubt that she is the suspect because she was black and wearing a hoodie. This fact made the police shot and killed Janelle without any reasonable cause, without any warrant and with no justify evidence that she is the suspected. Janelle was considered a danger to them. I think police should get more practiced with how to get their real suspect because if these types of cases continue in our society we would end up with genocide. Janelle was innocent she was worried for her grandmother health, she got her something to cure her cancer but she was shot to the ground.

Racial terrorism hasn’t finished, every individual face it in different way from other individuals. The stop and frisk law is experienced by every individual from differed backgrounds. I think the idea of stop and risk is install fear in us to be ready to get checked by the police but why is police forgetting that we still have the right to say no if we don’t want to get stopped and frisked. The police are not only being trained to brutalize, hate, fear, disrespect and murder any black, yet they have been taught that they can get away with it. Again racist still have not finished even after the civil right movement. There hasn’t any change in our societies.

1.Can you understand the purpose of this paper? Is it enough understandable?

2.What makes you understand the main message of this assignment?

3.Did I support the argument well enough? yes/no and why?

4.Does any of my writing/ideas/arguments seems unclear? What should I fix? Give suggestions.

6.Does the paper go flowing? Are my ideas/examples organize?

7.Did my points/ideas meet the purpose of this paper? Why or why not?

Rough Draft #2

  1. Does each paragraph revolve around the topic of Depression, does it support the topic of Marijuana usage? 
  2. Is my spelling/grammar correct or incorrect? If so, comment where 
  3. Does my writing fall clearly within the structure I have used, or has it become mixed up in certain places, If so comment 
  4. With the issue I brought up, does it make sense to the point where it connects to the play Intersections?
  5. Do you understand the purpose of this paper, Is it understandable. If not let me know in the comments below

Intersections is a play written and performed by students at Laguardia Community College. This delightful play has captured my attention when I started reading the script. It captivated me and other students because it brings out different stories of college students going through troublesome in which can relate to our daily life experiences. For instance, in the play one of the characters name Janelle seems to be dealing with depression because of her grandma’s illness. Janelle story can relate to any individual who’s going through distress because of losing a significant other. Stories like these can engage the audience because it’s a play giving us a reality show about college students situations, emotions, and handling their behavior on issues like Janelle and other characters are experiencing.

Depression is a brain disorder to make an individual feel moodiness, loss of interest activities, loss of appetite causing them to feel this way every day. Across the worldwide adolescents go through this illness ages 10-19 years old. Depression is a very serious cause of death because it can lead to suicide. In my opinion, I relate depression to one of the characters in the play Intersections. The character I chose is Janelle. In the play, Janelle was devastated to hear her grandma having stage 4 cancer. All Janelle really wanted to do was to take her grandma back home and take care of her rather than being in the hospital with strangers. In this scene, people can relate to how Janelle is feeling because when someone important to you is feeling sick, your first priority is to be there for them. You want to help them, support them, love them and make them not go through with it alone.

In addition, two scenes made me realize the symptoms of depression that teens go through. Janelle was roaming in the hallway skipping class. It seemed like Janelle has lost interest in attending class because she has a lot going on at home. Janelle states “If I come to class anyways I can’t focus”. In another scene, Janelle arrived home and was getting upset with Danielle because the nurse is not helping her grandma enough since she has reached her morphine limit. Janelle behavior shows how irritable she is about her grandma’s illness. Then it leads to Janelle possibly going to buy Marijuana for grandma in order to ease her pain. It makes me think, Janelle could also be using this substance, that way to make her feel relaxed and not think about her grandma coming to an end. So far this is all I have, I really appreciate if you leave some comments in order to help me get rid of my fogginess

So far this is all I have. I really appreciate if you leave some comments in order to help me get rid of my fogginess I have for this research paper.  Thank you 🙂