Write Thru Lit – English 102 | Spring 2018 | LaGuardia Community College

skydomingo36 commented on the post, Fanfiction, on the site Write Thru Lit 6 years, 1 month ago

I like the first person narration style of your writing. I feel like you injected a lot of wholesomeness into your character and plot, a refreshing contrast to the original work.

skydomingo36 commented on the post, Rought Draft- Steeve Moliere, on the site Write Thru Lit 6 years, 1 month ago

The story has a very good plot, very brutal; the paramedic scene takes the cake. reads like a melodrama and has a script like structure, like an anime. More correlation to the original work would enhance the […]

skydomingo36 wrote a new post, Fan Fiction, “The Ballad of Sapphire”, on the site Write Thru Lit 6 years, 1 month ago

The compact mirror held to her face closed with a snap, and now Sapphire was there again, alone. She took her mind off of her internal dialog and back to her curtain call ensemble. The makeup artfully applied, […]

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