Author: Jonathan

Intersections was truly a great play, and I hope too to read like this in the future. I believe the playwrights got their research from other people’s experiences or possibly their own personal experiences they went through when they were younger. In Today’s society, we face so many problems such as the fear of not becoming someone in life, having a proper education, and the role you have to play in our family’s lives. Family is everything and when someone is sick we must put everything aside, and focus on them at the moment. What really found touching and something I could definitely relate to is when Janelle made it her number one priority to take care of her grandmother and make her school work come last, because that’s something I had to do a couple years ago. The Research I plan on doing is going to try to look for an interview with the playwrights and try to understand them a bit more, get a better understanding where they are coming from. Research means to me like finding the final piece to the puzzle by getting the full picture and describing in your own words or someone else’s.

From the day, we are born our mothers have worked so hard to ensure safety, love, and compassion every day in our lives. In some circumstances, we realize what they truly have done for us when it’s too late. We don’t appreciate the little subtle things they do, such as comfort us when times are hard, cook your favorite meal after a hard day of work, when all she wants to do is go to bed. Those things we take for granted. When becoming a mother, there isn’t an instruction Manual that comes with you when you are born, she learns through time and that isn’t easy to do. She will try everything in her power to ensure the best for you.
In #DearMum by Momen Suliman throughout the video truly expresses how much his mother really loved him. Before he was even born she loved him to her hearts content. She struggled throughout her nine months of pregnancy and knew it was all going to be worth it, when she saw her Babyboy. She would give or do anything for him, as long as her son was safe and secure. He would also mention how he never had to chance to really thank his mother for all the hours she would spend cooking, cleaning, and taking care of him when he was down with a cold. In Momens words “She gave to me was the best medicine that was pure a prescription of tea honey and handmade lemonade what more could I ask for”. Momen truly regrets not saying he loved her more, and you can hear it in his voice how much he loves his mother and is grateful for everything she has done for him.
Throughout the video, he multiple forms of imagery. Such as the animations he’s doing with his hands, which really captivates an audience to be more immersed into the video. Also, the place he’s standing to film the video, the kitchen where Momen says his mother would be in for hours cooking for him and his family, and ask for no reward just the love from her son is all she ever wanted. Aswell as a mug of possibly tea right beside him which I thought was a great touch.
Questions
1) Did I sound repetive?
2) Punctuations?
3) Is there something I should change?
4) Anything I should take out that you feel doesn’t belong there?
5) Does the overall writing make sense to you?