What I did was recreating the last scene of the comic in which we see Kamala and her mother speaking.
•How can I extend and improve this?
•What can I add or leave leave out?
•Does it make sense?
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Diego,
Yessssss!!! I love the arrangement of your panels, and your drawings are so expressive!!! I absolutely love it!!!
I think you can extend it by not just leaving the conversation there: what happens? Is Kamala’s mom angry? Is she afraid for Kamala? Both? Do they fight? Does Kamala confide in her mom about her various fears about being Ms. Marvel?
Also, when you post the final version, it would be awesome if you post some close ups of the panels, in addition to the entire pages, you know? So the images can be easier to view without having to zoom in so much!
I’m soooooo excited to see where you take this: your comic is extremely compelling, and I can’t wait to see where it goes!!!
1. I love what you have done here. The drawings are really well done. I feel like you can extend it by adding either more conversation, and thus an extra panel to really explain things.
2.There’s so much you can go with this. I feel like you can add small details for example, in the background you can add items to show the location of where they are.
3. The comic definitely makes sense. Maybe you can add closer pictures so they are easier to read.
How can I extend and improve this?
you can make more of a conversation with the mother and add some color to the scenes
What can I add or leave leave out?
try to draw on a bigger piece of paper like sketch paper to be able to fix everything
Does it make sense?
your defiantly on the right track this is great ! just make sure to dedicate more time to your drawing so you can get that A with flying colors! good luck great job!