Rough Draft #3

  1. Does my explination towards my project make sense?
  2. What pages in the comic book do you suggest I should put that leads to transitioning to Ms. Marvel.
  3. Do you agree with the song selection I’ve chosen. Do you disagree that I should have music playing in the background or using it in the video in general.

In Ms. Marvel, I want to create a video focusing on the main character Kamala Khan and her transition to become a hero in Jersey City. I’m guessing for making videos it should be 3-5 minutes long, so that is what I’ll be doing. For starters, I will be placing sticky notes on the pages that will illustrate Kamala transformation into Ms. Marvel. On each page, I’ll be describing the emotions the character is expressing, Kamala thoughts, Kamala actions to how it connects with her emotions, bolded words connect with Kamala emotio/ action, etc. I will be going in depth about each comic book I place my sticky note and it will show Kamala transforming into someone who has so much confidence, butt kicking, beautiful and is comfortable for being who she is. (I will be showing you the pages that I’ve chosen for my video at the end). I am also thinking of adding music in the background like the theme song of either Justice Leage or Justice Leage Unlimted cartoon show.. somewhere that sounds like a herioc song lol. I’m not sure if I should play it when I’m showing the pages i’ve selected or play it through out the whole video, the volume of the music will be lowered since I will be speaking. Overall, that is pretty much what I have in order to make my video.

One thought on “Rough Draft #3”

  1. Maria,

    Holy crap, this is an awesome idea! I love the way you’re going to be close reading such an important moment, and in such a unique way! I think the song selection is awesome, and I think playing it while you introduce what you’re doing to your audience would be perfect and super cool. If you want to play it softly while you’re giving your analysis, that could be really great, too — just make sure that it doesn’t pick up too loudly in the recording, so we can hear what you’re saying. In terms of accessibility, I encourage you to strongly consider captioning your video, so that anyone who wants the benefit of your thoughts can have it!

    I am soooo excited by this: I can’t wait to see it!!!

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