Domnika Elarabi
English 102
March 27,2017
Professor Polish
Final draft
The audience for this project is the people itself that are reading my writing. What I want them to know is that having a loving mother that takes care of their child and that death plays a role greatly in our lives.What I want them is to learn is that the mother works very hard to provide for their child and that she is very loving, as well as the mother always worries more about their child than any other and that she wants her child to grow up to be a wonderful, smart child. When death comes along, it is okay to accept it and that no matter how hard it is it’s fine. I hope the audience will learn from my piece because maybe in what I put in the writing they can use it for the future reference, as well as, maybe use it an example for their daily lives. The unique perspective that I put in my writing is that I used a personal example that I never talk about and I felt it was important enough to put it in the final draft of my paper. The value of the perspective that I put it actually came true. What I learned about this project is that I learned to be a little more creative in my writing then I usually am. I am very used to writing paper in what the teacher wants, instead of making the paper a little but less structured than normally I would have it and I learned to be a little outside the box as well. What I would like to learn is to be more creative in writing, to think more outside the box, and to maybe write better papers. The peers played a huge role in class discussions because it gave me an insite to know them, how they think, they would leave amazing responses and as well as they gave me ideas in what I can put into my paper. My thinking about poetry is that for me it’s a little difficult to analyze because I frustrate me and for me, I don’t catch on really easily on simple little details that can have such an impact in what they symbolize or what the poster is talking about. If I had another week to work on this project I would add a few more little details into my writing and that I would make sure that it would be more understandable.
The pieces that I have chosen two spoken word poems called “Dear Mum,” and “Women of the World Poetry Slam Finals 2016” by Emi Mahmoud. The reason why I chose those particular spoken word poems is because they reflect on my day to day life and how they show that they are part of religion, inequalities, and love for the world. Also, there’s a lot of misconception of the meaning of Islam. However, in the videos, they show such a beautiful stance of seriousness, being powerful, and the love of humanity. Those poems are by Muslim faith people and they know where the society the society stands upon the religion faith and well as how the people treat each other. It reminded me in why I converted to Islam and how it gave me peace to myself and given me a better meaning in life.
Our mothers are the strongest human being that God has ever created, no matter how much we hurt them, we can always go back to them for anything. Our mothers are like soldiers because they are always their when we need them, when we put them down they do not lose their stance, and or we make broken promises. We can always forgive and forget in what we do to others but our mothers never forget what we have done and they remind us not to do things in life, in order for us to become the person that they want us to be. Our mothers are the best medicine that we can have because without them we are not complete. “I mean the love she gave me was the best medicine that was pure”. A mother’s love is the best medicine that anyone can get because even if you were just born, a toddler, teen, and or adult/old (lovely) person, you will not get that much love from your own mother then from any other mother. Mothers have a special way of knowing that you are sick, worried, and or in any way that you might be in danger. However, when a mother dies you start to think about what you have done better or should have done. Promises are made and promises are broken, although you wish them to be in a better place because of all the deeds that she has done and as well as she helped to become a better person. “Alhamdulillah all praise due to the Lord You did it all for me and not once ever expected a reward”. Mothers never expect anything from a child (like gifts, rewards, accomplishments, etc) all they want is for them to grow up as good children.
My mother is an amazing woman, that had 14 children and all natural birth. She was always up early in the morning to prepare food, make sure we got up early in the morning, made sure we had our homework done, made sure we had clothes and that we were fed every day. Every time I think of her, it just motivates me to hopefully become like her with my son.
Death always does wonders to everyone around the world. We consider death a scary thing and or more so not so scary, however, death can resemble many things in our daily lives. When we find out that our loved has passed and moved on to the other life, we don’t know how to feel. We tend to throw up, hold our stomachs, and or scream/cry our hearts out. But over the years we tend to forget how (our significant other) smells, what they did to help us to get better, and any kind of small reminder. Sometimes you have to go to a morgue to identify a body because due to an accident of some kind, it can be heartbreaking but you have no choice in doing it. “I do not recognize it it’s emaciated from dimmed form by a death I did not prepare,” sometimes death can be heartbreaking, excruciating, and possibly doing harm to yourself, more so, especially identify a body. Sometimes after you lose someone you lose someone, you can end up losing you own native tongue, culture, and or own family. When I was growing up, I have a lot of loved ones die, aunts, uncles, cousins, etc. Every Time we had to go do a viewing of the body to make sure it was them that passed, I didn’t know how to feel, it felt like I lost everything and everyone. When my cousin died (due to tuberculosis) it hit me hard, my hair started to fall out, I was shaky for a few days, and I was numb from everything, I wasn’t close to her at all. But after she passed she came to me in a dream three days later. She was the most beautiful spirit that came to me and (I remember clearly) she said: “overtime when you leave this place (the monastery) you will either go into drugs or convert into another religion”. In what she said it came true, I converted into another religion. After I saw that dream I was in disbelief and also it reassured me that everything will be alright, to me death isn’t scary anymore.
Loving your mother is always a special bond between anyone that has a mother. Even though there can be hardships between mother and a child, mothers are always there to help, no matter what time it is. As follows death, no matter how bad it hurts to lose that special someone especially a mother, father, brother, sister, and or grandparents. We can always hope to see them in the afterlife. Many of us somehow consume a lot of sadness or sometimes people take it as a positive and learn to deal with it, also use it as an example and to work our way around it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Rlu7IEOJMm_q0nW8dvBm-ymfu1Kyig4HMx9V7qqg6t8/edit (rough draft)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1h0mM3i4FTYB2A-hN8V_P0NI1XXcoQCL41QmT4MxAI3g/edit (expectations)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/10Bp67wo7YTdKlMB5TmeiNjtDRa_sClwM7uQdNtDyEPE/edit (pre-draft)
The people I peer reviewed is Adrian and Sandepk