Rough Draft #3

Carefully thinking out what format i wanted to do I still looking forward to doing the monologue. I feel that Kamala has a lot on her mind that she will like to address to family and friends. I will like to focus on the scene when she take a stand at wanting to let people know who she is or want to be classified as Ms. Marvel.

The scene that i was thinking about doing my monologue is the scene where Kamala is standing tall with her fist still swollen with super powers and she is thinking of telling everyone who she is. I feel i can collaborate her feelings more confident of letting people know who she is “Who Am I?” then feeling the old Kamala who wasn’t quite sure of herself. I was thinking maybe writing a monologue with her speaking how she over came her identity to be able to fit in with those around her as expressing her feeling more to say.

I need to know where to start and what will be my best format on with the topic scene i pick.

2 thoughts on “Rough Draft #3”

  1. hey msteele,

    I think a spoken word would work well with what your trying to say. you can really focus on the scene that you want to work on. try it remember all the poems that we were reading in class. especially like the dear mum!

  2. Myra,

    This part right here, your description of the scene: “Kamala is standing tall with her fist still swollen with super powers” — it’s so, so beautiful! Amazing writing!

    I think you can really rock out this monologue: going through everything that Kamala is thinking, feeling, and arguing about with herself will be amazing! I absolutely love the vision you have for this. The one huge trick is going to be making sure you capture Kamala’s voice as accurately as possible — try really getting into her narrative and speaking style so you can write like she speaks as nearly as possible! I’m so excited for how this comes out!

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