The idea: I am creating a scene right after Kamala shrinks for the first time, and then sees the roach. In this comic, Kamala will encounter bunch of radioactive rats (creating of the Inventor), and she will fight them off by using her powers. She will win only when she really becomes her true self.
- Is this a good idea? (It is the only question I can come up with)
1. The way you have illustrated Kamela Khan is excellent. Instead of drawing her as Carol Danvers the face she takes when she was saving Zoey, Bruno. You instead focused and depicted her as her true self which is really important.
2. Btw the way the rats are drawn is superb especially one at the top right. You have depicted the evilness in a rat which I enjoyed. Also when looking it gives me these chills which is cool because it shows how your drawing really shows the characteristics of evil. It remind me of a mutant rat that is made in a lab.
3. The question I have is will you be adding text to the characters that were drawn because I would love to see the plot of what would happen.
Adrian,
I absolutely love this, and I agree with Sandep’s comments (except I loveeee rats!) — you do a great job drawing them to portray the personalities you’re giving them!
I can’t wait to see those all arranged: make sure you’re taking close-ups of each, so that we don’t have to zoom in so far to see your beautiful art in detail! I’m so excited, and can’t wait to see your comic-collage!