Noemi, you’ve chosen a really important and timely topic.

The visual layout of your storyboard is really clear and easy to read! I would love to embed an image of this on your post (instead of the link to the […]

Ryann, I’m not sure I understand your new research topic, and the question you have posed. I’m also not sure who you’re referring to when you write, “It’s said that money is a source of energy.” Who says this, […]

Kevin, the deep web is definitely an interesting topic. After reading your sketch, I wanted to know whether you have been able to find any academic scholarship relevant on this subject? You will need a minimum of […]

Aziza, you’ve made good use of headings to clearly lay out the different components of your paper sketch! This helped me to identify your research question and thesis. Your question and thesis change throughout […]

You have a clear research question, Jonathan, as stated in the working title of your paper. I think you could tweak the wording of the question as provided in the text of this post–perhaps to focus on reducing […]

What an intriguing title, Angel! It definitely made me want to read more. I identified this as your thesis statement: “Feminism has changed the way people view women in America today by showing that women are just […]

Kavita, I’m glad you decided to focus your paper more specifically on Guyanese migration to the U.S.–it’s a really interesting topic! Here is some feedback on your storyboard:

– While reading your board, I […]

Chaya, I’ve been meaning to write: Thank you for this post reflecting on the role of language ideologies in teaching and learning about language. I’ve had to confront these internalized standards and the […]

Angel, thank you for sharing this wonderful post! It sounds like The Path Home Project launch was an amazing event, and while I was sorry to miss it, your post (and photo) gave me insight into what it was like to […]

What a beautiful first day! Kahdeidra, thanks for sharing the energy of your classroom with us. Your discussion of multimodal and (as you put it) “culturally sustaining” student-centered pedagogy is inspiring. I’m […]

Alison, thanks for writing this post! Your reflections on the differences between the U.S. college and New Zealand university systems definitely resonated with me, as someone who went to ‘uni’ in Canada! The […]

Ryann, you’ve chosen two interesting topics! What I see as common to the questions you’ve asked of both is your interest in psychology. I recommend that you search journals in that discipline to see what kinds of […]

Kavita, thanks for posting your topic. I strongly recommend that you flesh this out, and try to be more specific in coming up with a topic (or two). Immigration to the U.S. is a very broad topic. Some ways you can […]

Neliza, these are both interesting topics, and you’ll find a lot of scholarship out there! I would definitely recommend searching the libraries databases for scholarship that you can skim / read to find sources […]