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https://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/2018/12/05/norely-essay-3-first-draft/ LaGuardia Community College, CUNY Sun, 09 Dec 2018 20:49:14 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.5.2 https://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/2018/12/05/norely-essay-3-first-draft/#comment-145 Sun, 09 Dec 2018 20:49:14 +0000 http://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/?p=695#comment-145 The way you talked and explain the Language you chose was very good. You gave information about the Dialect as well. You also speak about the history of the language and where it came from so it gives the reader a better explanation. What would be good if you could add more information about the dialect and an example with it as well.

]]> https://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/2018/12/05/norely-essay-3-first-draft/#comment-138 Thu, 06 Dec 2018 16:16:45 +0000 http://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/?p=695#comment-138 I really like the essay how it is flowing so far. I got a good sense of the language and also what exactly you are going for. I would say to expand more on your essay, to talk more about the main idea of this essay which is how people perceive it and the education, culture, etc. I would say maybe another example would be good.

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