Comments on: Isaac Reflective Essay #2 [DRAFT]

By: Inés

Inés — Thu, 01 Nov 2018 18:10:47 +0000

Isaac, you have recognized crucial issues on your draft, but you need to explain and delve into them. Make sure that your description is more detailed – check the site for the classification and technical terms. Review my coments and try to explain clearly the connection that you established between the sign and the multiple layers of meaning (there are many). Check the rubric for this essay and expand on the third part taking into consideration your interpretation of the sign within the community/neighborhood.

By: Lizbeth

Lizbeth — Tue, 30 Oct 2018 03:23:12 +0000

you have a great start, I think it would help you if you also specify if this kind of sign is very common around this area or if it’s something different compared to the others. For your first paragraph you could explain if the font and the color have a specific meaning or if it adds to the sign.

By: Norely Rivas

Norely Rivas — Mon, 29 Oct 2018 15:08:11 +0000

Issac,
I think your description of your sign is on point, adding the things that your friends have told is a good idea. It will give your readers a little more back round information from the people of Puerto Rico. Maybe you can add what other type of slang words/phrases your friends use that relates to their culture ( maybe for example: Puerto Ricans use the phrase, “_____” in a friendly/funny way towards their friends.).
I think you can use ^ to add on to the last paragraph of your essay and demonstrate the proper vs slang language.that they use. Hope this helps