Comments on: (Ahmed) Reflective Essay #2 Draft

By: Inés

Inés — Thu, 01 Nov 2018 15:31:50 +0000

Ahmed, I agree with Alisia and Manisha, you have provided an excelent introduction and the description of your sign is very detailed. Now, you need to delve into your analysis – check my comments and make sure you connect your sign to the different layers of meaning. Then, as a conclusion you can relate and connect the sign to its specific location – 59th street.

By: Alisia

Alisia — Mon, 29 Oct 2018 04:55:41 +0000

Your introduction was great and I like how you gave a background on language before going into your linguistic landscape. I think you can expand a little further though on the sign, maybe add the colors, the train numbers, and where they go. I think overall your essay is good.

By: Manisha

Manisha — Sat, 27 Oct 2018 18:23:07 +0000

I really liked your introduction. I liked how you started off talking about language and not just going straight into talking about your sign. As far as talking about your sign, I think it’s good enough. I don’t know if this helps but maybe talk about where the sign was located like was it indicating the trains are found down here or was it a sign you saw when waiting for the train? Also, I don’t think you really had a conclusion so don’t forget to write one in your final draft!