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Comments on: (Xavier) Reflective Essay #1 https://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/2018/10/01/reflective-essay-1/ LaGuardia Community College, CUNY Sat, 06 Oct 2018 12:42:13 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.5.3 By: Inés https://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/2018/10/01/reflective-essay-1/#comment-38 Sat, 06 Oct 2018 12:42:13 +0000 http://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/?p=194#comment-38 Xavier, you draft is a good beginning. Pay attention to my comments and check the rubric – I think the rubric could help you organizing your ideas. You must describe the dialect/language that you have chosen first, and in your draft it is not clear. You must related that dialect/language to the attitudes spakers have towards that variety of speech – the way you did it with Spanish, they explain why (factors that contribute towards the attitudes described.

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By: Lizbeth https://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/2018/10/01/reflective-essay-1/#comment-20 Wed, 03 Oct 2018 01:24:55 +0000 http://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/?p=194#comment-20 I think you made some good points in your essay. My recommendation would be to write more about your language/ dialect . You could also write more about your experience and how has your language impacted your life.

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By: William https://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/2018/10/01/reflective-essay-1/#comment-15 Tue, 02 Oct 2018 22:23:53 +0000 http://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/?p=194#comment-15 I think you can further explain by adding your own experience to the topic. For example you can talk about your own languages and how have you been treated differently in many situations. Your explanation is clear and doesn’t go off track in your paper. Great essay.

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