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https://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/2018/10/01/reflective-essay-1-draft-3/ LaGuardia Community College, CUNY Sat, 06 Oct 2018 12:49:40 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.5.2 https://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/2018/10/01/reflective-essay-1-draft-3/#comment-40 Sat, 06 Oct 2018 12:49:40 +0000 http://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/?p=210#comment-40 Lizbeth, your ideas in your draft are a good start, but they need to be explained with more detail. Make sure to check my comments, I think that you have identifies the language attitudes towards your dialect/language (in this case Spanish), but you need to explain why. The readings that we did this week could be really helpful in order to explain and identify the reasons and the social factors that contribute towards these attitudes.

]]> https://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/2018/10/01/reflective-essay-1-draft-3/#comment-14 Tue, 02 Oct 2018 22:19:08 +0000 http://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/?p=210#comment-14 Your essay is really straight forward to your point of view but maybe write a little more to increase the length of your essay. Your opinion seems really clear and it seems like you don’t need to make much changes. You can add more of your thoughts and use more examples to make your essay a little longer. Nice essay!

]]> https://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/2018/10/01/reflective-essay-1-draft-3/#comment-13 Tue, 02 Oct 2018 21:13:19 +0000 http://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/?p=210#comment-13 Hi Lizbeth, I think your essay’s pretty straight-forward. And you also have a clear opinion as well. I wouldn’t necessarily think that you have to make any changes….but possibly some additions? For example, in regards to being from Mexico and speaking Spanish, what do Spanish speakers from the north think about how Spanish speakers from the south speak? And vice-versa. Or perhaps, how do Mexicans feel about/or communicate with other Spanish speakers like Puerto Ricans, Dominicans, or Spaniards? Do you use different words for certain things? You can also explain from your perspective on what it was like learning English and also how you feel (or felt, when you were learning) about it. Just some extra ideas if you wish to include them…

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