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https://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/2018/10/01/reflective-essay-1-draft-2/ LaGuardia Community College, CUNY Fri, 05 Oct 2018 14:40:35 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.5.2 https://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/2018/10/01/reflective-essay-1-draft-2/#comment-36 Fri, 05 Oct 2018 14:40:35 +0000 http://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/?p=204#comment-36 William, I think that you have described your dialect/language(s) with many details, but I would like to know more about how people perceive them – remember that the essay is about language attitudes. As a reader I need to clearly identify what type of attitudes speakers/individuals see and understand your dialect/language(s). For example, do they think that you are a highly educated or a more relax, laidback speaker? why? how can you explain these attitudes?

]]> https://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/2018/10/01/reflective-essay-1-draft-2/#comment-28 Wed, 03 Oct 2018 12:47:11 +0000 http://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/?p=204#comment-28 Yes, I can see that put in lots of context regarding the Chinese language as really crucial to you in this essay. And I’m not saying that its normal to be isolated or not from ESL kids like yourself is because you see different kids who speak different language I won’t say isolation just there nit knowing a soul and by time once they get some of the English then you won’t feel this isolation that you stated.

]]> https://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/2018/10/01/reflective-essay-1-draft-2/#comment-16 Tue, 02 Oct 2018 23:44:07 +0000 http://archive.cunyhumanitiesalliance.org/ell101fall18/?p=204#comment-16 Very good essay. I think you explained your background well and gave me a clear understanding of your languages. I do think you need to work on your sentence structures. Try to reread your essay to catch little grammar and spelling errors. Be careful with repeating the same thought in different ways. As far as the questions, they were supposed to be about how you can work on your essay, not about the content of your essay.

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